Kia ora Nadir my name is Mariah from Room 23. I enjoy reading your 6 sentence story but next time you should re-read your story to make sure it makes sense. There's one more thing you were missing - as I was reading I found missing full stops and capital letters. Other than those things you story was amazing. If you would like to check out my blog here's the link http://odsmariahk.blogspot.co.nz. Blog ya later!
kia Ora Nadir my name is Marley R in Room 25. I relly liked your post about your 6 sentence story i remember when i did something like this. why did you choos to use a really big Computer to solve his problems thank you for sharing your lerning You should check out my blog on http://odsmarleyr.blogspot.com/
Kia ora Nadir my name is Mariah from Room 23. I enjoy reading your 6 sentence story but next time you should re-read your story to make sure it makes sense. There's one more thing you were missing - as I was reading I found missing full stops and capital letters. Other than those things you story was amazing. If you would like to check out my blog here's the link http://odsmariahk.blogspot.co.nz. Blog ya later!
ReplyDeletekia Ora Nadir my name is Marley R in Room 25.
ReplyDeleteI relly liked your post about your 6 sentence story i remember when i did something like this.
why did you choos to use a really big Computer to solve his problems thank you for sharing your lerning
You should check out my blog on http://odsmarleyr.blogspot.com/
Blog you later
Marley R